Chapter
9:
Cover:
Normal trade dress.
Five slime slaves (Angella,
Netossa, Flutterina, Mermista, Spinnerella) being used
by five Horde members (Hordak, Grizzlor,
Mantenna, Leech, Dragstor). Angella and Hordak are the focal
point. She's on her back, looking at directly at the reader as Hordak makes the most of it. She's screaming in horror.
Angella: THIS CAN'T BE
HAPPENING! The entire Rebellion... ENSLAVED!
Hordak: Believe it Angella! Your Rebellion is literally FUCKED!
Story
title: On Wings With No Prayer!
Page
1:
Recap:
With She-Ra enslaved, Hordak began the Heroine Hunt
to eliminate all of Angella's
remaining group. Mermista, Netossa,
and Spinerella quickly succumbed, and both Flutterina and Angella were
knocked out of the skies...
Panel 1: In Castle Grayskull,
Sorceress finishing preparing the vial from chapter 11.
Sorceress:
It's taken all my mystical knowledge, but it's ready. A cure for the Slime of En'Slav!
Panel
2: She tucks it away in a pocket dimension as she turns towards a glowing
portal.
SFX:
vmmm
Sorceress:
But to administer it, I'll need help, and I've no doubt there's only one member
of the Rebellion left that can aid me in my quest.
Panel
3: She reflects on the enslavements of Teela and
She-Ra. Her mood is grim.
Sorceress:
Failure is not an option. The horrors Teela and Adora have already endured are beyond imagination.
Panel 4: Sorceress entering the portal.
SFX:
vmmm
Sorceress:
I just pray it's not already too late for the rest of Adora's
friends...
Page
2:
Panel
1: Flutterina, her wings pinned to a broken stone
wall by swords just out of her reach. She's making a futile attempt to shield
herself with her arms as she's blasted with slime from several Horde slime
Blasters, wielded by Troopers. They're being directed by Dyal-A-Mug.
She's crying out, turning her face away from the deluge of ooze striking her
arms and torso.
Caption:
Only moments ago, Flutterina was flying free. The
next thing she knew, she was struck from the sky and pinned to a wall by
swords.
Caption:
Suffice to say, she's now experiencing the realization of her worst nightmare.
SFX:
SPLOOOGGEEE!!!
Flutterina: NOOOOO!!!!!!!
Dyal-A-Mug: FIRE!
Page
3:
Panel
1: The deluge of slime stops. Flutterina's arms fall
to her sides. Her arms and torso are completely covered in slime. Dyal-A-Mug is in complete control.
Flutterina: No... Please
no...
Dyal-A-Mug: ENOUGH!
Let us see the results, yes?
Panel
2: The slime absorbs into her, revealing her nude torso and now green arms.
She's horrified, tears coming to her eyes.
Dyal-A-Mug (off
panel): Very nice indeed.
Flutterina: P-Please...
Anything but this!
Panel
3: Close on Flutterina's crying face as she begs Dyal-A-Mug to stop.
Flutterina: I can't... I
can't stand it! To wind up like She-Ra... I'd rather
die!
Panel
4: She screams as a new series of blasts strike her legs and wings.
SFX:
SPLOOOOGGE!
Dyal-A-Mug: But
killing you would be such a WASTE! Fire again!
Flutterina: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Page
4:
Panel
1: The swords popping out of her slime covered wings.
Caption:
She feels extreme pain and arousal at the same time as the slime coats her
wings. Immediately, the ooze heals their wounds, not that it truly matters.
Caption:
After all, she will never fly freely again.
Panel
2: Flutterina dropping to her knees as the slime
finishes absorbing into her legs and wings. Only her head remains unslimed.
Flutterina: Please...
Please stop... I'll be good... I'll do anything... Just please...
Panel
3: She looks up at Dyal-A-Mug, her face showing she's
been completely broken by her terror. He's holding a bucket.
Flutterina: Don't make me
a SLAVE!
Dyal-A-Mug: Such a
pitiful display. I'd have hoped you'd show a bit more decorum in the face of
defeat.
Dyal-A-Mug: Alas,
though it would be fun to prolong this moment and luxuriate in your wails of
terror, I have my orders.
Panel
4: Dyal-A-Mug pours slime from the bucket onto her
head. She's screaming in terror as it flows over her hair and starts trickling
down her face.
Dyal-A-Mug: And YOUR
wishes have no bearing on them at all!
Flutterina:
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Page
5:
Panel
1: Flutterina stands up straight as the slime now
covers her head completely. Dyal-A-Mug tosses the now
useless bucket aside.
Caption:
Her scream cuts off as the slime envelops her head entirely. Her sudden stiff
posture belies her horror.
Panel 2: Slave Flutterina
complete.
She's taking the pose. Dyal-A-Mug is quite pleased
with the results.
Flutterina: HAIL HORDAK!
HAIL THE MASTER! LONG LIVE HORDAK!
Caption:
Internally, her screaming continues.
Dyal-A-Mug: Proceed
to the Fright Zone. Hordak awaits your arrival.
Panel
3: Slave Flutterina flies off.
Caption:
The screaming will continue until her mind eventually dies...
Dyal-A-Mug: Well,
that was fun! Who's up for tormenting a village?
Panel
4: Elsewhere, Angella, her leg visibly injured,
leaning against a tree as she makes her way forward. She's clearly in pain and
not letting it deter her.
Caption:
Elsewhere in the forest...
Angella: Leg's...
nearly useless. Maybe broken! But I can't... stop moving!
Page
6:
Panel
1: She's approaching a rundown and clearly abandoned village, partly retaken by
the forest.
Angella: Why didn't Spinnerella wait?! If we'd stuck together-!
Angella: At this rate,
he'll pick us all off like flies!
Panel
2: She reacts as she hears someone approach her from behind.
Angella: Wait! I'm not
alone!
Angella: YOU!
Panel
3: Madame Razz and Broom move to brace Angella.
Razz:
Oh dearie my! You're hurt! Where are the others?
Broom:
We had a heckuva time finding you!
Panel
4: Now in the village, Angella rests on a stump while
Razz and Broom inspect her leg.
Angella: I don't know!
After the explosion, Flutterina and I tried to catch
up to Spinnerella, but before we could she got
enslaved and shot us out of the air!
Angella: I lost
consciousness, and when I woke up I couldn't find her anywhere.
Panel
5: Razz using some magic on Angella's leg to ease her
pain. Angella haunted by her failures.
Angella: This is all my fault! If I'd used my head and waited, we could have
approached this situation with almost the entire Rebellion!
Panel 6: Angella
looking away, ashamed. Razz trying to console her.
Angella: I let my love
for my daughter blind me! I never should have sent the
Star Sisters alone! If I hadn't, we never would have lost Perfuma
and Castaspella and god only knows who else!
Angella: I've failed
everyone as a leader.
Page
7:
Panel
1: Madame Razz trying to snap Angella out of her
funk.
Razz:
That's enough of that! You're doing the best you can! That's all any of us can
do!
Panel 2: Red background. Razz suddenly
speared through her chest rom behind by a thorny
vine. This is entirely done in black, to
hide the gore.
Razz:
Now once you're fixed up, we'll go and find URK!
SFX:
THUNK!
Angella, Broom: MADAME
RAZZ!
Panel
3: Angella and Broom holding the mortally wounded
Razz as several Slime Slaves, led by Perfuma,
Glimmer, and Double Trouble, emerge from the woods. Starla
is present as well. The thorny vine can be traced back to a spot next to Perfuma.
Razz:
Don't... give up... There has to be hope!
Panel
4: Razz lying on the ground, the last of her life fading away. Angella and Broom are in complete shock.
Razz:
Oh... dearie my...
Angella: NO!!!!
Page
8:
Panel
1: Broom rushing forward to avenge Razz. Starla
raising her arm to fire a blast. Angella motioning for him to stop.
Broom:
YOU KILLED HER! YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BE OUR FRIENDS AND YOU KILLED HER!
Angella: BROOM! WAIT!
Starla: She was
unnecessary.
Panel 2: Broom struck by Starla's ray, incinerating him.
Starla: As are you.
SFX:
FWOOSH!
Broom:
AAAAHH!!!!
Angella: BROOM!
Panel 3: Angella,
furious, rising into the sky and blasting the Slaves with a massive ray of
energy.
The Slaves try to no avail to shield themselves from the attack.
Angella: THAT'S ENOUGH!
NO MORE! I'LL FREE YOU EVEN IF I HAVE TO BURN THE SLIME OFF YOU!
Panel
4: Angella is struck from behind, right between the
wings, by a blast of slime. She's shocked by the sudden attack.
SFX:
SPLOOGE!
Multi-Bot (off panel): Target accquired!
Direct hit!
Angella: AAAHHHHHHH!!!
Page
9:
Panel
1: Angella lands on the ground hard. Multi-Bot appears behind her with a slime blaster. The slaves
begin advancing on her. Their body language should make it ambiguous if they're
themselves again or still controlled.
Angella: NO! Can't...
let Hordak win!
Multi-Bot: You're not letting him win.
Panel
2: Multibot sprays her wings and back, covering them
completely with slime. It's eating away at her outfit.
SFX:
SPLOOGE!
Multi-Bot: You are simply losing!
Angella: MY WINGS!
AAAHHH!!!!
Panel
3: The slime absorbs into her wings as Slaves Glimmer and Double Trouble kneel down to help her up. Her outfit is falling away from
her torso, the back completely dissolved.
Glimmer:
MOM! Let us help you!
Double
Trouble: You're hurt!
Angella (weakly): My
energy blast... Did it really do it? Have you returned to me?
Panel
4: The two slaves, holding her up one arm each, turning so Multi-Bot can have a clean shot at Angella's
front.
Glimmer:
It will be easier to finish the sliming if you're facing the blaster!
Angella: ...no...!
Page
10:
Panel
1: Angella looking sadly at Glimmer, tears in her
eyes.
Angella: No matter
what, I'll always love you.
Glimmer
(thinking): MOM! I'm so sorry!
Panel
2: Angella is blasted with slime right in the
cleavage. Her arms held by her daughter and niece, she cannot even begin to
shield herself or fight back.
SFX:
SPLOOOGE!
Angella:
AAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Caption:
Weakened, injured, and helpless, Angella can do
nothing as the slime strikes her directly.
Panel
3: The slime covers her body. Her head avoids the worst for the moment.
Caption:
In a heartbeat, the leader of the Great Rebellion is covered in slime!
Panel
4: She takes a blast directly in the face, covering her head completely!
Caption:
One last blast directly to her face puts an immediate end to her struggle! As
she's completely covered, her body gives in and climaxes, her orgasm heralding
the inevitable conclusion!
Angella: UUUNNNGHHH!!!!
Page
11:
Panel
1: Angella, covered head to toe in slime,
unrecognizable except for her wings, which have already finished transforming.
Glimmer and Double Trouble release her arms, which fall to her sides.
Caption:
Still cumming under the slime, Angella
feels it absorbing into her body.
Panel
2: The slime is now half absorbed. Her arms are starting to raise.
Caption:
In an instant, her dreams of saving her world and her family are dashed.
Panel
3: Slave Angella revealed, flanked by her enslaved
niece and daughter.
Caption:
All she has achieved is joining them in sharing their gruesome fate instead!
Angella: HAIL HORDAK!
HAIL THE MASTER! LONG LIVE HORDAK!
Caption:
Thus ends the Heroine Hunt!
Page
12:
Panel
1: The Crystal Castle. The door has been ripped off it's hinges.
Light
Hope: You have no place here, Weaver.
Panel 2: Shadow Weaver and Slave She-Ra,
holding her sword, confronting Light Hope.
Shadow
Weaver: It's YOU that has no place in the new Etheria
Hordak's creating! Soon all your mystical knowledge
will belong to me!
Shadow
Weaver: SLAVE! Use your powers to silence this etherial
interloper!
She-Ra:
As you command.
Panel 3: She-Ra struck by a beam of
energy from Light Hope that envelops her completely.
Light
Hope: She-Ra! Hear me! If you can say the magic words, you can cure yourself! I
will infuse you with pure will itself, but you must hurry!
Panel 4: Black background. In her mind, Adora, still as naked as if she was the slave, grasping her
sword.
Adora: Say... the
words... I... must try!
Page
13:
Panel
1: Black background. Adora shakily attempting to
assume the transformation pose.
Adora: For...
Panel 2: Shadow Weaver, shielding
herself from the light, seeing Slave She-Ra raising the sword.
She-Ra:
For the...
Panel 3: Black background. Adora is now in the pose.
Light
Hope: Hurry! You must say it now, before the slime can overwhelm my magic!
Adora: Have to try...
For everyone's sake!
Panel 4: Shadow Weaver, still shielding
herself, chuckling. The gemstone in She-Ra's shield turns black.
Shadow
Weaver: I was hoping you'd try this!
Page
14:
Panel 1. Larger panel. Parody of She-Ra's
transformation sequence. Slave She-Ra's in the transformation pose.
Instead of the usual visuals, it's the Fright Zone behind her and the energy
sparkles are black.
She-Ra:
FOR THE GLORY OF HORDAK!
Panel
2: Light Hope is sucked into the blacked gem of the sword. Shadow Weaver is
pleased with Slave She-Ra.
Light
Hope: NOOOOOOOOoooooooo...!
Shadow
Weaver: Well done, slave.
Panel 3: Black background. Adora sitting on
the ground, weeping into her knees.
Shadow
Weaver (off panel): Well done indeed!
Adora: Sorry... I'm
so sorry...
Page
15:
Panel
1: Hordak is already raping Angella
in the Fright Zone.
Hordak: You've got no
idea how long I've waited to have you like this!
SFX:
hump hump hump
Angella: You... may
have me... But you can't... kill an ideal! The Rebellion... will stop you!
Panel 2: Larger panel. Angella looks on in horror as Hordak
reveals that he's enslaved Mermista, Netossa, Flutterina and Spinnerella. They're entering flanked not just by Horde
members, but by several of the Evil Warriors as well. They're all wearing Horde
armbands.
Hordak: OF COURSE I
CAN!
Angella: NO! IT CAN'T
BE! EVERYONE'S BEEN ENSLAVED!
SFX:
hump hump hump
Hordak: Ideals tend to
die when everyone fighting for them fall!
Panel 3: Angella
realizing that only Frosta remains free.
Angella: (thinking) If Netossa and Mermista are here,
that means Sunder and Sea Hawk are probably dead! That leaves only Frosta!
Panel 4: Hordak
addressing the assembled villains while still raping Angella.
Hordak: My loyal Hordesmen, you've done well to eliminate these whores! And
to those that served Skeletor, you've impressed me
with how quickly you've been preparing for my arrival on Eternia!
SFX:
hump hump hump
Panel 5: Extreme closeup
on Hordak's mouth as he grins.
Hordak: As a reward,
feel free to use them to your hearts' content
Page
16:
Panel
1: Splash panel. A montage of depravity as the Hordesmen
and Evil Warriors descend upon the Slaves.
Grizzlor takes Netossa from behind as Tri-Klops
takes her from the front, raping her groin and butt simultaneously.
Mermista is raped by
both Mer-Man and Leech at the same time.
Trap-Jaw
and Mantenna have their way with Flutterina.
The look on her face should indicate that her mind has died like Sweet Bee's.
Position this near the bottom of the page to match up with the final caption.
Spinnerella finds herself
being used by Beast Man and Dragstor.
In
the center, Hordak continues raping Angella.
Near
the center, we see something making it WORSE for Angella.
Clawful and Whiplash are raping Double Trouble and
Glimmer right before her eyes.
Caption:
Immediately, the Fright Zone is filled with the sounds of rough sex and
feminine grunts.
Caption:
None of the newly enslaved Rebels are spared the indignity.
Caption:
To torture Angella even more, Hordak
brings in her niece and daughter, so they can all be raped as a family.
Caption:
And worst of all, in the midst of this horror... The screaming in Flutterina's mind stops.
Page
17:
Panel
1: The Kingdom of Snows, still surrounded by a bubble
of absolute zero with Horde tanks outside.
Caption:
Elsewhere, as the orgy goes through the night...
Panel 2: Sorceress standing before Frosta, who is on her throne, clearly under strain from
maintaining the bubble.
Frosta: The situation
must be worse than I know if you've come all this way to meet with me,
Sorceress.
Sorceress:
I'm afraid it's dire indeed.
Panel 3: The two women conferring.
Sorceress:
I fear that by now, we may be the only ones left with any chance of stopping Hordak's plan and freeing the Rebellion.
Frosta: But Angella can surely-!
Sorceress:
I attempted to reach her. She has already been enslaved.
Panel
4: Frosta not liking what Sorceress is telling her.
She's shocked.
Frosta: Dear god...
What do we do?
Sorceress:
We have only one chance. And I'm afraid it will require a massive sacrifice on
your part.
Sorceress:
To save everyone, you will have to become a Slime Slave yourself!
Next:
A Chilling Sacrifice!